For this blog I will show you some of my writing And it's a play called Musem madness!!!. And it's 8 pages long so sorry about this.So I hope you can tell me what's good what needs improving and what's good. So the story is about 2 boys and 2 girlsAnd when they go into the museum they bump into a golden statue.
Museum Madness !!!
Teacher : Ok can everyone please walk single file to the school bus.
Ben : Oh boy. I hope this museum is better than the last one. It was so boring I fell asleep
Carlos: Ben did you hear that? This museum has a real gold statue in there.
Narrator : But behind them were Stefany and Emily, eavesdropping.
Emily : Really Carlos? You think it’s a real gold statue, ha dream on.
Stephanie: Emily’s right. It’s a fake gold statue. Just look at the newspaper. It looks fake.
Ben: Ok let’s just stop fighting and listen to the Teacher to see what group we’re in ok?.
Emily: FINE!!.
Stephanie: FINE!!.
Carlos: FINE!!.
Narrator: So after five minutes the last group was called out.
Teacher: Ok and the last group is Emily and Stephanie.
Emily and Stephanie: Ya we’re in the same group.
Teacher: And Ben and Carlos.
Emily and Stephanie: Nooooo!!
Ben and Carlos: nooooo!!
Teacher: Ok please go on the school bus and fill up from back to the front of the bus. Thank you.
Narrator : So one minute later the school bus was full except for two seats. Ben, Carlos, Emily, and Stephanie were all looking at each other.
Ben : I call window seat.
Carlos : No I do.
Emily : No I do .
Stephanie : No I do.
Narrator : So they all race to the last two seats but as they’re all fighting over the last two seats the Teacher is looking at them and tells them off.
Teacher : Hey!! you four stop fighting Emily, Stephanie, Ben, Carlos just sit down on the two seats there’s plenty of room for all four of you.
Narrator : One hour later after that long bus ride they finally got the the Museum of natural history and got off the school bus and got into their groups.
Teacher : Ok, you can go and look at anything you want to look at.
Ben : I want to look at the the golden statue to see if it’s real or not.
Emily : Ok let’s see it then.
Stephanie : But it’s up at the top floor. Are we really going all that way just to see if it’s real or not?.
Emily and Ben : Yes.
Stephanie : Ok.
Narrator : Then Emily, Ben, and Stephanie left Carlos behind and went straight to the golden statue to see if it was fake or not and then a minute later they got to the room of the golden statue.
Ben : Wow it looks so real.
Emily : Well will see it to believe it then.
Narrator : Then Ben puts his hand out and touches the golden statue and an alarm goes off and two security guards came running as fast as they can.
Security guard one : What happened here? Did one of you touch the statue?
Ben : No.
Stephanie : No.
Emily : No.
Security guard two: Ok then.
Ben : But we did see a man. And he touched it.
Security guard one : Well do you know where he went?
Ben : Yes he went running towards the exit.
Security guard two : Ok maybe we can still go catch him in time.
Emily : Well you better go and get him then.
Security guard one : Ok then but stay out of trouble Ok?
Ben : Ok.
Emily : Ok
Stephanie : Ok
Ben : So let’s see.
Narrator : Then Ben tries to touches it for the second time.
Ben : It feels heavy and really hard.
Emily : Ok I’ve got an app that if you take a picture it will tell you what it is.
Stephanie : Well what are you waiting for just do it.
Emily : Well ok.
Narrator : 3 minutes later the app finally finishes .
Ben : So is it real or not Emily?
Emily: It’s real.
Ben : Yes I was right in your face.
Stephanie : Ok guys we should be going now before we get caught.
Ben : Ok let’s go.
Narrator : Then when Ben takes his hand off the statue, the statue starts and shakes and falls and snaps in half onto the ground.
Emily and stephanie : What have you done Ben!!!.
Ben : Hey it’s not my fault plus this would not have happened if you did not eavesdrop on us.
Emily : No don't you drop this on us it’s Carlos’s fault, he’s the one who said there was a real gold statue.
Stephanie : Anyway where is Carlos?
Ben : I think he’s at the history centre.
Carlos asleep/ : snore, snore, snore.
Emily : Anyway we have to fix this up. Right?
Ben : Ok let’s look through our bags to see if there’s any glue.
Narrator : After 7 several minutes looking for glue but they find nothing until Ben finds something.
Ben : Hey guy’s look at what I found.
Emily : What is it?
Ben : Tooth paste.
Stephanie : And what do you have tooth paste for?
Ben : I don’t know?
Emily : Well, maybe use the toothpaste and glue it back.
Ben : Ok.
Stephanie : Ok.
Narrator : 1 hour later they finally finished.
Ben : Come on let’s get out of here.
Emily : Ok, but don’t forget Carlos, Ok?
Ben : Ok.
Stephanie : Ok.
News man : Breaking news, the golden statue has been broken and who ever did it tried to fix it with toothpaste and this has been seven news.
