Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Claire's Langledroop writing!

There is a creature living in our bush! It is cute. Have a read about my Langeldroop!
By Claire in Paua Room.

Of all the creatures that roamed the earth the Plateau school bush’s Langle Droop was the cutest fluff ball ever.

I was walking up the stairs i saw a purple thing running i started to run it stopped it had no where to go it was so cute it had cute eyes its fur was so soft it was so sced i said “hello  it said hello bake it was a very cutest voice she said do you wont to be my friend ok my name is Emma min is claire sorry if i sced you i was getting wom i will give you my jacket so you can get wom ok i better go i her someone coming it mit be my enemy i will hid you ok so you downt get scared cwik we woll hid in the trees let's go how about i will take you home lets go i need to taw my mum and dad my mum said when you are a baby you need to run away taw me where to go ok is not long its vat home ver i see my mum and dad lets run mum dad arw enames cik mum can my friend came shor i will sown go to school ok i fawnd her cool so i pot jakite arand her thankyou you haft to be awored her popolre fluff and she is so clever she now wen someone is caming

i now wot your awold a thoey i betory go bake to school bye i wowly visit you again to morow ok bye. she is  so sweet and lovely and lovable and a  pretty  thankyou for saying that abate my dortor i need to go to class. i woll see you to morow ok.

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